The assignment was to find a layout and use it for inspiration to create my own 2 page layout. We were also supposed to incorporate our first week into it. I loved this layout because it is so interesting and real. I like how the circles and what they contain are the main part of the layout and that the background also shows object giving the illusion the the circles are on the desk. I like the gradual downward motion of the circles, and how some of them over lap. The title block that is plain with one simple word. The font features the main word larger then the description that follows. The font on the left page in the upper left covers part of the circle giving the font a sense of dominance. The phrase written is the most important part because it describes my first week perfectly.
yours is so pretty! i bet when color is added to it it'll look really cool cause one of the pages had a ton of color while the other side was more muted! good job :)
ReplyDeletei love this design. its cute but gets to the point. it is very clear the important things to you in your drawings and how your semester started out. color could emphasize on those important things... which im sure will make it look amazing!
ReplyDeleteMichelle- I like the layout you chose. Its very different than a lot of the other layouts I've seen people pick. I agree with Melanie and Jaklyn that adding some color would help your composition since color seems to be very important in the magazine layout. Very creative though, good job.
ReplyDeleteThis design is very interesting. I think adding color will only enhance your composition more.
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